Hello! I just wanted to say thank you for all the recent watchers, faves, comments and for all the new followers on tumblr. You guys are amazing and keep pushing me to get better! I was going to add Roxas but I think this looks fine how it is. >> Click here for the normal version
There's something a little odd about the shape of his face. It's a bit too narrow, and his cheeks look puffy in comparison. Along with that, I think he's got too much hair.
Don't get me wrong though - aside from that, the picture looks great. The Keyblade looks good, and the shading on his clothes is pretty much perfect. You did a good job coloring his hair, too. I also like the background, with the lines a little to the side.